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Jashael

Jashael

  • WRFF Archive Re: I Need to Review you! Puh-lease? O_o (OPEN)

    FINALLY DONE AT LAST. Who's next? :)

    Jan 3, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Look At Me

    So, I'm actually impressed with this one, Twin! Only one line bothered me: I know there is love, and not just lots of hate . I just feel it was ...

    Jan 3, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: One of Them

    So I took the guts to review this (LOL), when I knew that you're an awesome writer. Anyway, since I owe you a review (after failing and being late with ...

    Jan 2, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Insomnia.

    Hey Emziiiiiieeee! I thank you for the request. Here comes my short review: NITPICKS FIRST: Here is how I'd edit this: Can't think, Can't flinch, Can't move, Not an inch. ...

    Jan 1, 2011
  • Other Re: Young Writers Literary Journal 2011 Please Help!

    Hey there Rain, finally here to post my opinions on what you should pass. This is the last stage of my quest. XD After reviewing each, I'm finally here. LOL ...

    Jan 1, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Strewberries with Cream

    NITPICKS: outnumbered Now, just like in the previous poem I've reviewed, which was also yours, I've seen this unnecessary spaces. I don't know if these are intentional, but let me ...

    Jan 1, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Sarah

    NITPICKS: I think these should be: everything goodbye whenever Just tell me if these are intentional. Oh, this is such a lovely poem. It was very touching, my friend. Nicely ...

    Jan 1, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Forgotten Who

    Oh, I'M SO SORRY. I've written this draft like, weeks ago, and I forgot to post it. Awww...I hope I can still help even if this was requested and written ...

    Jan 1, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Ever feel like me?

    Hey there Silent, as part of the quest that you have given me, I'm here. I know you already told me not to review everything if I don't have the ...

    Jan 1, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: You died, tonight.

    Oh I love this. Funny. Full of feeling. Universal theme. Anyway here at YWS would certainly relate to this. HAHAHAHA... Epic, Mom. Dearly epic. XD Pass it for the journal. ...

    Jan 1, 2011
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Thorns & Roses [1.1]

    So I've got a bunch of review requests, but I stumbled upon this and was hooked by the cover, so now, I'll give a short review. XD After not posting ...

    Jan 1, 2011
  • Lyrics Re: Magnified by Jash Bagabaldo *tweaked*

    Thanks to all who're liking this. XD Oh, and yo SHeri! of course, you can! Just click on the "LISTEN" =)) It'll lead you to Muziboo, where there's an mp3 ...

    Dec 31, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Look At Me

    saves spot...

    Dec 30, 2010
  • General Articles Re: 5 Reasons Why YWS Is Better Than Every Other Website

    I won't agree with number two, 'cause just so people know, there are other forums with custom titles. :) But other than that, this is an amazing article. Good job! ...

    Dec 30, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: Stuff

    This is so cool, girl! =) It was light to read, fun to read. =) The rhythm was a bit longer at some lines, but twas all fine. =)) Good ...

    Dec 30, 2010


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