Jashael

OK, you're very much welcome here because people here are random proffs, whut? HAHAHA... WELCOME! Hope you enjoy your time at this site. :D It's more fun than parentheses.

I'm kind of a sucker for a story about holocaust... I'll try to get to this... if you want. :) I've read Night, Number the Stars, Mad Desire to Dance, ...

First off, I think the story itself is touching and sweet, but a little unbelievable, mostly regarding Andy. I realize we don't know much about him, since our knowledge is ...

....Okay, pretend you're a police officer now. A young, thirteen year old girl runs into the station, she's yelling frantically, she has cuts and bruises, and I assume she'd be ...

Thanks, Inbetweener! :)

Hi, Miss kitty with the pretty avatars and pretty violet stars, May you please review this? MY YWLJ SUBMISSION [SHORT STORY] Thanks a bunch! :D

I'm doing you a favor by posting here: KAKA, dear...review please? :) MY YWLJ SUBMISSION [SHORT STORY] Thanks!

Ish, since you've turned down my previous request (you're weak! hahaha...kidding. I know, I'm the one to be was too long really.... and boring zzzzz) okay... So, my dearest Isha-ish... ...

Hi, missy. this is my first time to ask from you. :)) MY YWLJ SUBMISSION [SHORT STORY] Thanks very much!

Picture: Some explanation (PLEASE READ): OK, so this's what I'd submitted to the Young Writers Literary Journal. I wrote this last week, hoping that I'd make it before the deadline. ...

I'm finally here deary. :) COLOR CODE: NITPICKS | ADDED | CHANGED | PAY ATTENTION Nitpick #1 FORMATTING Bold and italics Who calls at 7 in the morning? I thought. ...

Hey Skinso, as you've requested. I'm here in a jiffy. LOL But I was already thinking of reviewing this since yesterday, nuh... I just didn't get to linger with the ...

Hey, mom. I'm here for a review. :D COLOR CODE: NITPICKS | ADDED | CHANGED | PAY ATTENTION Nitpick #1 I wasn’t always this jaded but working nightshift in a ...

If you have any questions regarding the short review, and if you ever need a review again, just drop by my wall. :)

Hey, Skinso. I'm back and making it up for being oh so long gone. HAHA... OK, so as I expected, I wouldn't have anything to nitpick. I wouldn't have to ...