Jashael

It actually depends on what you're writing. First, you have to study how to write a paragraph. What is a paragraph? You've got a topic sentence, supporting sentences. When writing ...

Nice idea, Shadow. That's a very great tip for people like you. I've got the opposite problem. I tend to have long names because I can't choose from all the ...

When I use third person (I'm a first person too... I mean I prefer it), I just write away. The thing is, it doesn't have to stray away much from ...

Hello Tal! I have the same problem myself. But I've figured it out eventually. First, you have to consider your audience. You have to ask yourself: Will it be for ...

Hello there. First off, I'd have to say that your examples were, in English standard is wrong. I'll give you a correction: "We need to get to the house , ...

Hmm... for me, it kind of works the other way. The first thing I do with a poem is find a theme. Kinda like what you said with the "something ...

Hello, Wayward! I feel like calling you Sock since that's what you put in your small greetings note. I'm Jashy. I'm glad to welcome you here on YWS! :)

Hi, twin. :) Thanks for the review. :) I don't want to be 'opposing' you again but, about the 'lie', read this: xD About the introductory part...I thought the same ...

Hi, Cad! Welcome to YWS! We've got cool emoticons here, don't we? I love 'em too. Though I still can't figure out how to use the other cool ones. We've ...

Well, I haven't been here when you've first been here. I can't tell what's new and such. But there are some things that's been new since I've registered. First, there's ...

Hi, Ilyah! I can see a lot of people already told you about what's going on with this site. I can only give you one hint now: stalk people. =) ...

Hi, Matthew! First, I'd like to welcome you to YWS! :D It's a cool site, I know. Ehem, now moving on. I'm a little confused about what you meant by ...

Congratulations! Whoo! :D

Hi, Dearie! I'm finally here. I'm skimmed over the previous reviews and saw that people already nitpicked before me so what I'm going to do today is comment on your ...

Haha... I really liked this. It was funny, but true. I've been through the everyday stalking myself, too. Like the part where you mentioned that you dreamed of being featured, ...