Jashael

I personally don't think it would be a turn-off or such. It might actually be cool. My suggestions would be: avoid info dump. Like you said, we have no idea ...

I think what you've got there is fine. It doesn't really matter, trust me. It's a name. You're in control of what you want it to sound like, how you ...

It's normal. It actually depends on the character of the author, I think. I have a bunch of unfinished pieces, too. (Got only one completed short story; the novels are ...

I know I saved a spot here, but I need the points badly, and you probably know that. (Oh, Twin, thanks for the cheer! :D) I wondered how many times ...

Hi, Kirby! Welcome to YWS! :D You'll surely love it here. And yes, I hope that happens. :D

Hello, m'dear. Nice poem you got here. I can see you really meant it to be funny. It was funny. :lol: OK, there was only one line I wasn't sure ...

YOU'RE NEW?! XD Well, welcome? We're teammates. :lol:

Hello, TheAlphaBunny! I liked the posing of the girl in the drawing here. (The way his face was slightly slanted forward. That's a hard pose!) It's also neat that you've ...

Hi, Ish! Haven't been talking to you for awhile now. Came to this poem by accident. (Pffft... it was featured and congrats for that.) I'm glad that I did click ...

Hi, Shiney! Glad to read this poem. I really liked the simplicity of this, with three line stanzas, and the rhyming. ( Yours and floor are familiar. Oh yes, I ...

Hello, UV! Nice poem you've got here. I really like the style you used here. The flow was good, and the words were revealing. I've honestly got nothing against its ...

Hello, dearie. CSI Jashy here for a review. I kind of like your style, but I honestly do not understand the flow of this. I couldn't quite grasp the order ...

Hello Commando Green Panda or LIkeItLikeThat13! Welcome to YWS. Signing on here is totally gonna help you fulfill that promise. Show 'em what you've got! :3

I liked it BTW. ;)

First, I congratulate you on being featured. Second, the title changed since I've checked this out yesterday. Third, I'd like to say is: You're a YWS addict. I'm so cool ...