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  • Serious Discussion and Debate Re: Capitalism

    Lol, Solvy, I didn't realize I was acting very serious about it. I refrained from going LOLOLOL at first because I thought you were talking about the game that seriously. ...

    Jul 27, 2011
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Stay Close to Me

    jasminebells: Thanks for the review! There are a couple of things I want to hit on, though, just to be clear. Considering they are different paragraphs, it is actually proper ...

    Jul 27, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Paper Bag

    Hey, Fantastic. I fell so in love with this piece that you mustmustmusssst write more. Amazing imagery, amazing characters and I loved what you did with Annalise, turning it into ...

    Jul 27, 2011
  • Serious Discussion and Debate Re: Capitalism

    Hey, I know the game and it's gathering dust in my closet as we speak. I used to play it a lot when I was younger but I lost all ...

    Jul 27, 2011
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Stay Close to Me

    Grammar and little comments will be in red. This easily has the potential to be one of my all-time favorite short stories I've ever written. I haven't decided if I'm ...

    Jul 27, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Summer Rain

    Hey, I read this a couple of hours ago but only came to review now. I've read a couple of chapters of your novel 'Pornographic Kiss' and I liked it ...

    Jul 27, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Golden

    Hi Lily! So I liked this very much. I agree with Explosive_Pen about how the first line of the first two stanzas sound too, I dunno, out there, like pushy. ...

    Jul 27, 2011
  • Lounge, The Re: Harry Potter!

    I've decided not to see it in the movie theater's because then it'll really be over. I can wait a couple months for it to go out on DVD so ...

    Jul 15, 2011
  • Lounge, The Re: What social media services do you use?

    Facebook, formspring, tumblr.

    Jul 14, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: alone

    Hello, This reads to me like something that should be inspiring and profound and deep, but isn't. First, the format is irritating. It’s a cage Or window That’s been shut ...

    Jul 13, 2011
  • Randomosity Re: Bad Clone

    Ability is a bad clone of skill.

    Jul 13, 2011
  • Randomosity Re: Bad Clone

    Carbon dioxide is a bad clone of Vanessa Hudgens.

    Jul 13, 2011
  • Randomosity Re: Bad Clone

    A Hanuka song is a bad clone of Hanuka show.

    Jul 8, 2011
  • Randomosity Re: Bad Clone

    jingle bells is a bad clone of a Christmas song.

    Jul 8, 2011
  • Randomosity Re: Bad Clone

    God is a bad clone of Budha.

    Jul 7, 2011


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