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Jas

  • Lounge, The Re: Winners of the Big Random Story Contest

    Congrats guys!

    Aug 12, 2011
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hi

    Oh, this again.

    Aug 8, 2011
  • General Fiction Novels Re: The Massiveness of How Sad It Is to Want Someone (1.1)

    Hey, FIRST TO REVIEW! YESSS! Anyway, this was a little bit different from the last chapter, but just as good. It did leave more questions than answers. To be honest, ...

    Aug 7, 2011
  • Information Desk Archive Re: Freedom for Storybooks!

    Oh, okay, cool :)

    Aug 5, 2011
  • Information Desk Archive Re: Freedom for Storybooks!

    Just out of curiosity, why'd it go from 500 points to free?

    Aug 5, 2011
  • WRFF Archive Re: Come closer, my pretties. (Re-Opened!)

    Hi Pengu, Could I please have a review on that? Thanks! I'd really appreciate if you worked on the characters, plot, imagery and stuff rather than nitpicky grammar stuff. Thanks ...

    Aug 5, 2011
  • WRFF Archive Re: Storytelling Reviews

    Hi, Could I please get a review on this? Thanks so much!

    Aug 4, 2011
  • WRFF Archive Re: A God's Review Providing You Beg

    HAII :) Can I have a review on this please? Thanks!

    Aug 4, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Don't fear.

    Hey, I'm not sure whether you wanted a review on this, considering you heavily insulted it, but it's not that bad! I like the secret stanza idea, it's unique and ...

    Aug 3, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Winterland.

    This is the second version of a short story I wrote a couple of months ago. I edited it a lot and need the harshest, most honest criticism I can ...

    Aug 3, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: I Remember

    Hey, So I'm going to review your short story :). I've read a bunch of your pieces but never had the time or energy to review. You're a really great ...

    Jul 31, 2011
  • General Fiction Novels Re: The Massiveness of How Sad It Is to Want Someone (1)

    Hola, I really liked this. It's really negative and depressing and not exactly the shining moment of the MC's life. I loved how you began with the MC's plan for ...

    Jul 31, 2011
  • General Articles Re: deleting from forums

    Hey, So I'm not sure whether this was a joke or if it was serious, but none the less, it was hilarious. You started it off pretty strongly and while ...

    Jul 31, 2011
  • Writer's Market Re: Great New Writing Community (e-publishing)

    I used to be an Inkpopper and some of my stuff got pretty high on the ranking thing but I didn't like how barely anyone reviewed for fun and how ...

    Jul 28, 2011
  • Serious Discussion and Debate Re: Capitalism

    xDD Probably. You can change it, if you want. It'll probably bring in more people, lol.

    Jul 27, 2011


I went to confront noisy neighbours, only to find the windows dark, stuck with two notes. The ghost, too, had "gone fishing". Something still whistled.
— Liminality