Jas

You can pretend it's a short story. :] Thanks!

Hey, I really liked this. You have brilliant imagery and the way you use metaphors and such is amazing. It's really short but I feel like if it were any ...

Hi there, I'm Jas and I suppose I'll be reviewing your piece. :] I liked this. I truly did and I feel like you could expand it farther out so ...

Holaa, So this was painfully short to me, but it did it's job. It's really very good even though I had to go back to the previous chapter and re-read ...

I'm going to try to do 5 reviews. :]

~*~ Hai guys. I literally just finished this 37 seconds ago, with no editing or anything but as always I honestly don't care about spelling or grammar mistakes, because this ...

I'm interested!

Oh, I've ruined this, haven't I?

lol.

For moving it.

Er, round head, no visible legs, seems to be very flexible in the...neck area. (Neither am I *even shiftier eyes*)

Blonde hair. Green eyes. Pale skin. Kind of short. :}

Well, I don't know her so I wouldn't have known that. and...YOUR NAME IS WEIRD TOO.

Yeah. Well, your name is weird.

YEAH WELL. ... YOU HAVE...A WEIRD...NAME. YEAH.