Jas

Thank you :]

Hey, First off, welcome to YWS! This is really good. Wow. I was a bit surprised at how much I liked this. You have a very good voice, a smooth ...

The Columbia College Chicago Fiction Writing Department announces the YOUNG AUTHORS 2012 writing competition. Young Authors began as a local contest in 1995. Since then, this national competition has

Hey Apple! Can I ask for a review on this: and maybe the second part of that? The link is on the bottom of the first work. Thanks! ~Jas

Hey, I like this a lot. :] You have a very poetic, flowing way of writing prose and your imagery is just beautiful. First off, I think you need to ...

Hey, Thanks for all the great reviews! Here's one especially for you. Even though I haven't read previous reviews, I hope I'm not redundant and I hope this is some ...

Hola! I haven't read the previous reviews so excuse me if I'm redundant. :] First off, I wouldn't suggest putting the amount of words in the beginning. I've never seen ...

Honestly. ... This hurt my eyes to read. Characters Jezabel (most popular girl)17 Kyle (Jezabels older Brother and one of the most popular guys) 19 Tyler (Jezabels best friend)17 Jace ...

~*~ This is not really a chapter, as it is an interlude sort of thing. It's the end of chapter two but chapter 3 hasn't begun yet. Does that make ...

I will review this during the weekend. :]

I'd really like some super harsh critique on this. I've gotten a lot of great reviews but nothing that was complete honest and harsh. I hope you can help me ...

Kinda simple. Tell us your favorite TV shows! I think my top three favorite shows are Skins UK, Glee and Bones. How about you?

A lot of this might be offensive so erm yeah. Nigga- friend. Yo, this mah nigga What's gucci- What's up? What's guccccci, mah nigga (We say nigga a lot.) Whylin- ...

Hey Lauren! Can I ask for a review on

omg i like you. HAI! So, welcome to YWS! My name is Jas and I'll tell you my real name if we become friends. ;] Yes, I was a wannabe-writer ...