User avatar

Jas

  • Fantasy Novels Re: Guardians

    Hey, I liked this. You are very descriptive and that's a good thing but don't go overboard. You wouldn't want to read about every piece of hair on a character's ...

    Jan 17, 2010
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Dakota's Diary, Chapter *New Edits 5/11/10*

    I have to say I really like this. It was very well-written and moving. It reminded me of a book I had read...can't quite remember the name now though. You ...

    Jan 17, 2010
  • Archive Re: Gladiators

    This seems interesting...I'll join Name: Annete Hendrix Fighting Name: Sakura even though she is not fully japanese due to her weapon she has been called that. Gender: Female Age: 17 ...

    Jan 17, 2010
  • Archive Re: The most twisted plot ever! Do not question us.

    out of character. Sorry just fixed that up. Imagine Jhonny being one of those hippies who stayed a hippie even though the fad ended 30 years before :)

    Jan 17, 2010
  • Archive Re: Twilight Parody(Gory Shocking Ending)Hunting Death

    Suddenly, a vortex opened up and Elizbeth was spit out onto the stage. "WTF? This is not my storybook?" she said with a bored look upon her face. She walked ...

    Jan 17, 2010
  • Archive Re: The most twisted plot ever! Do not question us.

    I was still being sucked into the vortex when suddenly I was spit out. "Hey pretty mama, what's happening? Peace" some weird human hippie asked me. He was really familiar...where ...

    Jan 17, 2010
  • Archive Re: The Seductress

    Let's see if this will work out Please Join...Iv'e been having many storybook ideas lately. Well I've always had them just never knew that the Storybook forum existed. :) Anyway: ...

    Jan 17, 2010
  • Archive Re: Trapped

    yeah! When are we starting? Like tomorrow...or today....or now...*winkwink nudgenudge*

    Jan 17, 2010
  • Archive Re: Project L.I.F.E

    Annabelle I was talking to the kid Mirus and he was like OVERLY excited about this. ADHD much? Suddenly, Logan jumped in and got him off my hands. If I ...

    Jan 17, 2010
  • Archive Re: Area 52

    We can start whenever Loveless. Actually you can start it now if you want. Just read my characters history for backround of the story and stuff and where they all ...

    Jan 17, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: my own world chapter 1

    I like the idea but grammar and spacing needs alot of work. I hate doing the grammar fixing thing, soI'll leave that to someone else :) But I like the ...

    Jan 17, 2010
  • Archive Re: Project L.I.F.E

    The day went by fast. Then a boy came up to me and asked me about where we were and stuff. Like I hadn't heard that one enough. "I'm annabelle. ...

    Jan 17, 2010
  • Archive Re: Darkness! (part two of Gone trilogy)

    ~Melinda "What the fuck are you doing here?" I yelled, pointing the gun directly at the Coates kid's head. Buds I think his name was. "Oh, Melinda. What a pleasant ...

    Jan 17, 2010
  • Archive Re: Area 52

    yupp there can be more than one immrotal if you want but really no more than 3 max :)

    Jan 17, 2010
  • Archive Re: Trapped

    This sound promising Diver Trapped and unsure, the divers don't know what to do. They turn to the ancient city, hoping it might have means of escape. Name: Aisha Batara ...

    Jan 17, 2010


The good ended happily, and the bad unhappily. That is what Fiction means.
— Oscar Wilde, The Importance of Being Earnest