Jas

Hey..it's me again! I am like dying right now for the journal entry. Your transitions aren't choppy or blunt at all, unlike mine in my stupid English teachers mind (grrr)...sorry ...

Hey! I really liked this. There isn't much to say about grammar because I'm to lazy to check that out :p I'll let one of those grammatical obsessie's do that. ...

Mo. go ahead and start it...you can start whenever you want...like right now cus this is the last night I have on this useless piece of metal AKA my laptop ...

I justed realized this has pretty much no plot left, lol. Anyway Elizebeth jumped into the vortex and ended up in the Twilight Parody Storybook. ZOMG! Maybe she and Emmett ...

Kay this is the storybook discussion thingy-ma-bobber. Any questions should be asked here. And all irrelevants.... ***RIP Mr. Squirrel***

Okay one more person joins and I'll start it off! :)

Should have put my profile here? I PMed my profile to you...

Yeah I just keep refreshing the page hoping that you or someone else (really you :)) replied. I'll make the Storybook Forum thing now :).

"Probably in like 10 minutes. God I hope you mean go in the water wet.." Angler replied a smile across his face. "You perv" Avery said, smiling brightly in Angler's ...

**In pretty much every Storybook I got into my character ALWAYS got really hurt :) I think that's pretty funny** I woke on someone's warm body and my arm hurt ...

Ha Sponsored by.....you guessed it! The hobbits from Lord of The Rings! Haha my favorite part. Nice Job

**Yeah I just PMed the people who havent posted yet*** He stepped foreword his eyes still locked on mine. His lips were only about 2 inches away from me,he leaned ...

Aisha I stood in the corner, feeling uncomfortable to just jump into the conversation. "Hey Aisha! You going to come introduce yourself or am I going to have to embarass ...

This truthfully was very original and very well-written. You exelled at explaining Solus' emotions. Good Job, PM me with the next chapter if you can! :p

I liked this poem alot! Good job, only problem I found was the last two lines Is having free will as good as we think,Or is it only to make ...