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I burst out laughing while reading this...which is not smart to do when it's 12am and your on the computer behind your parents back! Then the backstreet boys and nick ...

AHH! What happened to Cinderella, Prince Butthead and Delle triangle of affairous love?!?!? I'm gonna be honest here, you really don't have much of a plot here...but I still love ...

URG! This was originally supposed to be about her love for Prince Charming! And who names their son charming? Like the second the sobbing baby comes out the mom goes, ...

BACK OFF YOU RAPIST!! LMAO I LITTERALY LAUGHED REALLY HARD WHEN I READ THAT!! wait that's not a real rapist i hope... anyway RANDOM! The vortex was still open and ...

But we didn't want to start without you! Your super important! :)

Once again loved the story, but Im starting to not like MC...she's turning into one of those god-forsaken heroes...uck. Too cliche for my liking anyway good job and it was ...

Wait are you from Britain? That is so cool...I always wanted that amazing accent....America is so boring...we only have wars and recession and Obama and stuff...pshaw who needs Obama when ...

But it didn't disappear before Emmett from Twilight (WTF?) and Elizebeth came out furiously making out.WTF? Well at least they wouldn't live each other out.... Then the weird green carebear ...

What the heck is primary school? Do you mean Elementary? Cus if you do nope I'm in 8th grade baby AKA Junoir High AKA Middle School AKA Hell. And midterms ...

3 minutes left you know.....

I feel so akward writing all these questions and critizism now because I realized a bot too late that the questions wee all answered in upcoming chapters. *akward* Anyway (my ...

ZOMG! Your 14?!? Yayzers! I can now reassure myself that the fact that you are two years older than me gives you rights to be better! Well my subconscious disagrees ...

I envy you so much. I mean whenever I read Harry Potter or Speak or the Hunger Games, I could always reassure myself that they were older,had more experience and ...

I loved this! I read chappie one and also loved it but was feeling rather selfish and didn't want to review...please forgive my selfishness :( ANYWAY, Ms. Eloise? I just ...

ZOMG! Sorry for the chatspeak but wow! This was amazing! Not any spelling mistakes from my eyes, really weel-written piece. I can't wait for the next chapter! Now off to ...