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Re: Fallen
The line: or the comfort of being foud in a game of hide and seek is probably my favorite. I really liked this poem but the end was a bit ...
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Re: It's Kamas! (by Mo.)
My spork is mentally unstable...after watching that new (it's really like 3 years old now but whatever) Batman movie, he has decided to become BatSpork through dangerous, painful prcedures....he's act
Jan 19, 2010 -
Re: Trapped
I knew that I didn't like Thaniel that way and it would be cruel to mess with his heart but I really hated Cate after she called me a slut. ...
Jan 19, 2010 -
Re: Trapped
I felt bad shrugging off Thaniel's arm but it was when I saw the demon Cat (yes that was intended) smile that I felt I needed revenge. I turned to ...
Jan 19, 2010 -
Re: Shattered
*Moved to Non-Fiction* This should be in Other Fiction or something because it never happened so not relly non-fiction. It's a story and stories are usually fiction. Plus the non-ficiton ...
Jan 19, 2010 -
Re: Area 52
I'm making another character, this is going to slow, her name is Avon, she's Nova's twin and Nova actually was abandonded by her father while Avon was kept and loved ...
Jan 19, 2010 -
Re: Trapped
"Hey Asa or whatever your name is could I speak to you for a moment?" Cate said in a sickingly sweet voice. "Umm, sure" I replied, wondering what the heck ...
Jan 19, 2010 -
Re: Shattered
1. Grammatical Mistakes Green means I liked this particular phrase Grammar corrections are in light purple Red/Orange/Rerange/Oranged :p means I feel you should change that part Waking up to get ...
Jan 19, 2010 -
Re: Inspire me.
Opposite of flower_child actually, I liked the begining more than the end because in the begininng it was a different look on love, in the end it was quite frankly, ...
Jan 19, 2010 -
Re: Parrots.
I have never reviewed ctures before even though Ive taken alot of them :p From my humble mind, really good! I liked the parrot on the right more though :) ...
Jan 19, 2010 -
Re: Shifters: Chapter 1
I liked it but the begining was going to draw me out. Just too cliche. It was good description and all but Iv'e seen it a million times. First say ...
Jan 19, 2010 -
Re: Twilight - A Reality.
Hey, I used to LOVE the twilight series but after reading it like 30 times I realized how anti-climatic Breaking Dawn is and how corny the love scenes and actions ...
Jan 19, 2010 -
Re: Those Little Glass Slippers (13)
That was a bit graphic. I dont understand how she was tied up though, like how one would be for public whipping kinda like how (dont take this religiously this ...
Jan 19, 2010 -
Re: Those Little Glass Slippers (9)
Loved it! Finally all who is evil is back! Whoopie! (I must have one sick mind to be whooping at stuff like this :p)
Jan 19, 2010 -
Re: Area 52
I would but my character is still on the run so it wouldnt make much sense. And my character is going to be alone or with a group of people ...
Jan 19, 2010
