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Re: Complete Critiques – Thorough reviews on assorted topics
Hi, would you mind reviewing this? Ignorance is Never Bliss: Prologue No kind words, no harsh words, just honest truth. Thanks! :) ~Jasmine Bells~ Peace, Love, Writing, Insanity and Chocolate
Jan 20, 2010 -
Re: Jack's Critique Emporium [BACK IN BUSINESS]
Hi, would you mind reviewing this? Ignorance is Never Bliss: Prologue No kind words, no harsh words, just honest truth. Thanks! :) ~Jasmine Bells~ Peace, Love, Writing, Insanity and Chocolate
Jan 20, 2010 -
Re: You Know You Want Some [re-opened]
Hi, would you mind reviewing this? Ignorance is Never Bliss: Prologue No kind words, no harsh words, just honest truth. Thanks! :) ~Jasmine Bells~ Peace, Love, Writing, Insanity and Chocolate
Jan 20, 2010 -
Re: Make me....I dare you
Hi, would you mind reviewing this? Ignorance is Never Bliss: Prologue No kind words, no harsh words, just honest truth. Thanks! :) ~Jasmine Bells~ Peace, Love, Writing, Insanity and Chocolate
Jan 20, 2010 -
Re: I'm but a poor soul looking for reviews? (Accepting)
Hi, would you mind reviewing this? Ignorance is Never Bliss: Prologue No kind words, no harsh words, just honest truth. Thanks! :) ~Jasmine Bells~ Peace, Love, Writing, Insanity and Chocolate
Jan 20, 2010 -
Re: Feed The Pink Elephant! [Open!]
Hi, would you mind reviewing this? Ignorance is Never Bliss: Prologue No kind words, no harsh words, just honest truth. Thanks! :) ~Jasmine Bells~ Peace, Love, Writing, Insanity and Chocolate
Jan 20, 2010 -
Re: In the mood for a review, per chance?
Hi, would you mind reviewing this? Ignorance is Never Bliss No kind words, no harsh words, just honest truth. Thanks! :) ~Jasmine Bells~ Peace, Love, Writing, Insanity and Chocolate
Jan 20, 2010 -
Re: I will review you!
Hi, would you mind reviewing this? Ignorance is Never Bliss No kind words, no harsh words, just honest truth. Thanks! :) ~Jasmine Bells~ Peace, Love, Writing, Insanity and Chocolate
Jan 20, 2010 -
Re: The Shattering of a family Photo: Part1 0f CH. 7
I think you mastered perspective through a child's mind. I think that you should jut explain the transitions between the years a bit more. Explain on her 5th birthday her ...
Jan 20, 2010 -
Re: In the Pages - Chapter 1
My gosh! I'm in confusion, awe and fear at the same time. I'm so confused right now because this made virtually no sense. I'm in awe because it kinda made ...
Jan 20, 2010 -
Re: Project L.I.F.E
Annabelle He threatened our lives and cursed Iffy out. I subconsciously pulled out my bow and was going to shoot when Iffy grabbed my arm, "Don't" "He's not worth losing ...
Jan 20, 2010 -
Re: Circus Outcast (formerly Misfit Circus 2)
How amny Circus performers are there? And when will we start?
Jan 20, 2010 -
Re: Ignorance was never Bliss: *correct* Prologue and Chapter 1
***I only just realized I put up the wrong part. Below is the correct Prologue: I could never remember my parent's faces. They were murdered during World War Three in ...
Jan 20, 2010 -
Re: The Seductress
The "guests" began to mingle between one another. "Hello, I'm glad to be here!," said Carmen DiNazzi, the rich Italian turned New York girl. I tuned in, listening to see ...
Jan 20, 2010 -
Re: Circus Outcast (formerly Misfit Circus 2)
Name: Juliette Loui Age: 15 Power/Circus Act: Can charm anything and anyone into a sort of trance AKA mesmerism. She can also reanimate dead people and inanimate objects though only ...
Jan 20, 2010