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This is great! I think that the only little nitpick I saw was this paragraph: Despite the mind-numbing conditions, the trip was a relatively short one. One a day and ...

It wasn't anyone from my class.....:_( but of course I LOVE your story! :) ~Jasmine Bells~ Peace, Love, Writing, Insanity and Chocolate

I liked this but the line AS children we chase each other in friendship and love, I think the love doesn't really fit, because when I was like 10 I ...

I stood on the rock not really paying attention because I was more worried about something else; who had set off the bombs? I thought about it for a minute ...

woah...I thought this was a food fight! not a monster war! anyway: ME take food! ME slam cheerios on Aspiring head! ME STRONG! ME STRONG!

Hey just saying you guys have a right to be suspicious but don't go too far, after a couple days you'll be "seduced" by her and everything will be happy-then ...

*hey, I don't think Juliette would say that. She's in nice mode remember?* I watched as my fellow misfits talked trash about Else. She was nice enough to this side ...

Name: May Fitzregald Age: (between 11 and 32) 19 Height: 6'1/2 Picture: Personality: Born-leader but when Sasha takes control she goes alone. HATES being lead by anyone. Flirty but doesn't ...

The sound of forks, spoons and knives were not the only sound in the room. The "guests" mingled and talked for a while before a slight ahem from me silented ...

I'll get back to you by the weekend, I read a couple pages so far and I already love it.

I'm not in a reviewy mood right now but I liked it. :elephant: purple elephant to you!

true dat ^ they all seem to die within the first couple of days..then your left wondering..why hasn't anyone posted on this?

converse (bowling shoes kinda look like them)

oh god i must have freaked you out o.0 *_*

Yeah random me here just wanted to say because I've gotten so far 5 emails from YWS saying someone has posted on the post you posted on (WTH?) that I ...