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Aww! I love you all! And thanks Jabberhut, I love your erm 8ball too! Kamas...youv'e been here for only a year!?!? *gasp* I thought you were like a co-creater I ...

I completely agree with Zoey,, this reminds me of Love Story by Taylor Swift and Romeo and Juliette and a whole bunch of other stories. It's an EXTREMELY over-played subject...try ...

Hey, I liked this alot but not as much as the last one because the angels/wings thing is a bit overplayed too. I liked the riono-winged thingy because that's oriinality ...

Wait I don't get it the sophomore died? That is really one in my school every died other than the dad of a girl in my class...wow that's pretty tear-jerking....died ...

Emmett slapped away my hand...what a chicken nugget! I sprang onto his head adn broke it off watching it crumble much like the way that weird vampire dudes did in ...

Also you guys Juliette changes every other day..like if she was good Juliette on Monday on Tuesday she would be bad Juliette. And I'm going to change it from her ...

oh oops :) I'll fix that now!

WEll here's the DT for anyone with questions...

Juliette, presently animator I woke suddenly, feeling soft hands push me back down. I shoved Eve and stood, wiping the grass off my pants. "Here comes the bad side" Eve ...

Wow...I really like this actually. I'm a bit jealous you stole my spot of number two ont the leader boards but nevermind that! Your really good. This however gaveme the ...

Awww! This was so heart-breaking! Only a couple Nit-Picks: The N in Nissan should be capitilized. I made a disgusted look when I saw the sink. The pans had crust ...

I love this! I'm pretty sure it's in a goth guy's perspective but maybe that's just me. I liked the sentence "Her words, though distant and faded call out to ...

Once again I like it. I don't understand the transition. Is she telling the story to the people who saved her or is she just reminising herself. You should explain ...

I loved the last line. During the story, I was interested by what was happening butI hadn't found that pizazz, then the last couple of lines intruiged me and brought ...

Awww! Why?!! Please! You can't leave us hanging like this! :) Maybe...umm I don't know where the plot is going for this but maybe Je dois blâmer for this chapter. ...