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My posts are doing fine....;/

Real name- Emma Bishop Screen name- UnholyBallerina Race and attribute- Human/Dark Appearance- Long red hair normally down and flowing. Crystal Blue eyes. About 6'1 Job- Dancer Level- 12 Skills- Very ...

So many people quit or stopped posting that it would be like three people from the Circus against like 100000000000000000000000000000000 from the gov. I think thsi startd to die when ...

I was thinking maybe Annette would get super jealous of Kimy cause she likes Jake too but JAke likes Kimy. So Annette gets in line with Dari to ruin Kimy.

~Melinda I was going back to the dojo before hitting up Coates Academy to grab the picture of my family I had. The last picture we took before everything started. ...

This kinda died. Well no offense to anyone but there really wasn't much of a plot so it seemed pretty Twilightish to me. Two star-crossed lovers never able to live ...

Ray you should start. Your character was Will right? Start it from Buds being gone or something. I realize the simalarities between Will and Caine now. Its cool. Maybe Jim ...

I actually swear to god just read Gone like I just finished where Diana kisses Sam on the corner of his mouth, goes "Sorry Sam, the bad girl always ends ...

I call a girl, this seems promising. I'm going to read the book now.

I love this idea and I love the story so far. Only thing your spelling needs alot of work. I've been told many times and now I'll tell you, when ...

This is genius!! I so love this story and this idea. Would you mind if I did one for some of my classes but I'll put like 'This was thehobbitgangstas ...

OH. My. Freaking. God. THIS WAS AH-MAZING!!!! Funny, I'm writing a hororr twin story too, mine is about the cliche one twin sister better than the other except with a ...

Hey this was good but I think that you tried a bit too hard to act like MAx, you weren't as tough as she sounds and not as sarcastic. Plus ...

This was a fairly good poem my only problem was unlike your last poem. This had too much puncuation. IT distracts the reader from the writing and can be annoying. ...

He doesnt know much. Much less than Juliette, Else or Nick but more than a rock :)