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Jas

  • Lyric Poetry Re: and that's okay, in a way

    This gets a little wordy in the middle, but I love the ending. I'll be back to review this probably Thursday, at most the weekend. :]

    Dec 13, 2011
  • WRFF Archive Re: Niebla's Reviews [Closed]

    I'll give you have a frog now and have after. I have friends who just dissected them so they won't be too hard to find. xD Umm, the piece is ...

    Dec 12, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Winter's love.

    This is just some random experimentation thing. I realize that this is very long so for any and every review I get, I'll award you 200 points. Thanks! I tried ...

    Dec 12, 2011
  • General Articles Re: Young Writers Censorship

    I love that this created traphic on here. I enjoyed reading the comments. I just wanna say i don't leave cuz it was hard as hell finding this ((yes i ...

    Dec 11, 2011
  • General Articles Re: Young Writers Censorship

    1) The community here isn't very supportive. For all the "thou shalt critique!" stuff I hear, I've received maybe two comments that have actually made me think about my writing. ...

    Dec 11, 2011
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: A little Christmas story

    This is rather gooey and mushy, but it's the type that's just right around Christmas. Everyone needs a little fluff in their lives. It's really well-done and I don't have ...

    Dec 11, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Vimini

    Hi, I'm so excited that you have something new up. I like it a lot and as with almost everything you write, I feel it could be something really great ...

    Dec 11, 2011
  • General Articles Re: Young Writers Censorship

    Lol, Snoink, he actually didn't spell anything incorrectly.

    Dec 11, 2011
  • Randomosity Re: I saw the best minds of my generation destroyed by

    Dec 9, 2011
  • Poetry Discussion Re: Official Christmas Poetry Contest!

    Can we collaborate with another poet on YWS?

    Dec 9, 2011
  • Writing Activities Re: The Best and Worst Thing About Your Writing.

    You basically say what is the best and worst thing about your writing. You acknowledge what's good about it and what needs improvement. :] I'll start. Worst thing: My imagery ...

    Dec 9, 2011
  • Randomosity Re: I saw the best minds of my generation destroyed by

    Dec 8, 2011
  • Randomosity Re: Talk Backwards.

    racecar

    Dec 6, 2011
  • Questions and Answers Re: Ask a question here (or start a new topic!)

    Merrr. Lumi beat me to it and I didn't even notice!

    Dec 6, 2011
  • Randomosity Archive Re: What is the member above you known for? [2]

    For posting everything and anything in short amounts of time AH, I don't know what that means! Is it bad? o.o The member above me has a really cool username.

    Dec 6, 2011


what are stories if not just vehicles for the pain of your own heart
— soundofmind