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Jarred911

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Mark of The Stones Chapter 3

    this is what you wrote he started facing anywhere, I would change the anywhere to everywhere. But, it was really good. You should check out some of my stories. The ...

    Feb 17, 2010
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Painful Bliss

    I seem to like but it needs more pop! You should really work on scenery detail too. The last book I wrote I had to do over the first six ...

    Feb 17, 2010


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