JapaneseNinja

Sorry, it seems some parts didn't italicize well, but their thoughts were meant to be so.

“Don’t make us blow the door open, Don. Come out with your hands up, and return Time to us. We know you have it. This building is surrounded, you have ...

I will definitely do the "Fruit being Aliens" one! Thank you!

Thank you HostofHorus, it did help. I already knew of the random story theme generator, but I was looking for prompts such as "Why are tennis balls fuzzy" or "What ...

Recently, my English teacher assigned us a project called the Anything Book. It's 50 pages of anything you want. At first it seemed simple, but after 30, I'm stuck! I ...

First off, I really like how you set the setting for the reader making it easy on them. Now here is the criticism. First, when the narrator has a thought, ...

I've done two or three so far :3

I haven't read the first chapter, but I think I will read it, because I liked this work. First thing I will comment on is the lack of enticement on ...

I have read this book as well, and your paragraph is so convincing I might just read it again! i really like how you give just enough detail to the ...

Thank you for the advice! I guess I do have a problem with past tense and present tense. Grrr. By the way, my computer lagged, and then ending should say ...

My heart was racing as I sped through the twisty roads in the dark woods. I could hear the faint whine of the sirens following me, but I knew they ...

Thanks for the feed back! I guess I could've switched the sun thing around. I wrote it up for a school assignement, and when I read it aloud in class, ...

Haha, very funny. Did this actually happen to you? Very observant... If you are wondering why I'm not giving you any critique, I'm not one of those people that you ...

Catching bugs on a sunny day Praying for sun so we can play Running around playing "Kick the Can" This is my life in Japan Cleaning out the swimming pool ...

Very powerful. I even read the spoiler and I couldn't stand but feel sad! It means it's really good... I think.