Jamie_rocks

I don't have time for a full review right now, but I think you need to change the title. "Child's Play" is the first Chuckie movie.

Thank you so much for taking the time to review this. I don't understand how I can proofread it FIVE times and still have typos... Anyways, Brad's friends are only ...

Thanks you so much for taking the time to get to this. I know it's extremely long, but it is the standard size for a chapter in a novel. I ...

Okay, thanks to you both for taking the time to review this. Lilymoore: I appreciate all the nitpicks. However, I'm not sure I'm going to fix the improper grammar you ...

Yes. Like I said, I'll clarify that later, but this is just a secondary project and I really don't have the time right now. I'm just collecting input so that ...

Anyone? Please I need feedback!

Okay, thanks you guys so much for all your effort. I know I'm really horrible with typos and run-on sentences; my critiquers get on my back about it all the ...

Okay, thanks for taking the time to review this. I knew it would be flawed, as I just wrote it last night, so thanks for pointing everything out. Though as ...

Okay thanks. And I guess I should clarify on one point in the piece - the monster is her mother. I'll try and make that clearer as soon as I ...

Okay thanks. And I guess I should clarify on one point in the piece - the monster is her mother. I'll try and make that clearer as soon as I ...

No one else has anything to say? Please?

Okay, I'll fix the typos. And I'll keep that in mind, but I don't think I'll change it just yet unless anyone else mentions it. Thanks though.

Okay thanks. I'll fix the typos right away. Thanks for the pointers.

Anyone else? Please people I need feedback!

Okay, I'll do that. Thanks. :)