JamieAnn

thanks! and yeah I know my grammar sucks. :[ And I kinda wanted to make him really ambiguious sort of that he can be any man you know?

This is something I wrote a couple weeks ago. I'm not really sure where it fit because it is a narrative but its too short to be full story, also ...

Okay. That was really good! It was really sad and you described the woman's breakdown really well. Also I really like how you have the charachter's thoughts at the end ...

Hey. This is my first review soo here goes. I reall liked the concept of this story but in some places the wording seemed awkward. For example instead of "'ash ...

oh thanks! and hi and umm.. 200-250? o.o

Well heres my second try at posting this: Anyway hopefully you are reading this which means I don't have to do it again later. I'm Jamie from New Jersey (meh) ...