Jaliayh101

omg i really like this song i really didnt know the tempo so i put it in my own way and it was just great i really liked it i ...

Why did you have to go Got me left on my o-o-o-o-o-own. You said you'll be here forever (ever) until we're gray and o-o-o-o-old. (oh yeah) Why did you lie ...

wow i really like your story it is a straight A plus you gave a lot of details you made the characters seem like they were actually there well i ...

He likes me and he likes her why can't he choose what does he not see in me am i too bright, am i too young, am i too short ...

agin i was confused by another poem you guys have to got to put in more details you just can't say "His lips pursed unto mines and I fainted. That ...

wow....you made me feel lifeless for a moment after reading that poem i was kind of gasping for breath. Maybe you should put this poem in dramtic poetry come on ...

I was very confused reading that poem maybe you could've gave more deails I mean what are you saying are you saying you like being free when you run through ...

ha, ha, ha that was a really funny poem i hope you aint 'gangsta foe real cuz if u is i pray for you anyways if you're not that was ...

OMG this story is so amazing i really can't imagine that sweet, sweet Herminoe or however you speel her name being a sex kitten this girl sounded more like a ...

wow...this story is so good you are making me want to study more about the world war one it is so interesting i wonder what will happen when the whistle ...

thanks for the extra tips i really needed them i ma new to this site i will try to do better next time i will try to describe things more ...

what a way to wow the crowd you know everything there is to know about being a story writer even if you didn't know you were very smart to use ...

i really like your story it is very infomative other stories i write don't give you a lot of explaining but through your whole story i completely understood for example ...

[pre]Everyone was quiet for a moment. Then Mr. Acorn walked slowly to the door. He pulled it open. A faun was standing at the door. “There is a meeting being ...

[pre]CHAPTER ONE The trees whistled as the strong wind passed through. A huge tornado was passing through Chicago. A little girl named Carla sat in bed hugging her teddy bear ...