Jahn-Xealios

Well it isnt a bad little story it just seems your starting off in the middle of a book! I dont know if that is what you intended or not ...

That's fine, as long as it's what you intend. I just got the impression of picking up a TV series or anime mid-season and getting a synopsis at the beginning ...

Oooh, I see you haven't posted any reviews. :) This is just a friendly little note to tell you that this site requests a critique-to-post ratio of 2:1. EDIT: I ...

This story is inspired by and based upon several things to the game Xcom UFO, I would also like to thank the creators or the game for making the game. ...