JacksonDove

Good evening Not bad. Not bad at all. It reads pretty well. And you've set up some nice and interesting characters. Certainly it was not a chore to read. Rather ...

Good evening Well, as I have said, I've gone through it. I find that the use of imagery is good, certainly your reference to chains and bondage and isolation. But ...

Good evening. Well, here I am reading chapter 2 and I'm once again finding no real problems with it, it's a good length, with good pacing and it held my ...

Good evening. First I would like to start off by saying that I am not very good at analysing poems, so I can merely give you my opinion, not a ...

Good evening. Well well well. Really, this was a fantastically creative idea. I do love the way you told us, the sequence of the plot from one part to another ...

Hello there. You shall be the first person I review. Good for you! Well, right down two it. It is a really good beginning, certainly you've set yourself up for ...