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Aramanda I froze, my burned hand submerged in the icy water and going numb. I was looking at Ray, frowning, still panting. For some reason, all the panic and frantic ...

Aramanda I actually shouted in alarm as the engines whined, the ship picking up incredible speeds. I slid on my back about a foot before I reached out and wrapped ...

Aramanda I straightened up, wiping the grease from my forehead with the back of my hand. Ray, standing there, observing me in a most interested fashion, his eyes taking in ...

Aramanda The engine room was beginning to get hot. I started to sweat as I paced from control panel to control panel. An insistent flashing light was nagging me in ...

Aramanda He had only called us here to tell us that were were leaving? Trying to keep my thoughts calm and neutral, I got up and left, feeling a little ...

Aramanda The invading order sounded in my head and made my start, panting heavily. Gritting my teeth, I froze, suddenly furious. What, in all the galaxy, possessed me to allow, ...

Chapter 1 She flicked the lighter on and off, the orange flickering light illuminating her masked face for a brief moment before it was snapped off once more. On and ...

Good evening Not bad. Not bad at all. It reads pretty well. And you've set up some nice and interesting characters. Certainly it was not a chore to read. Rather ...

Good evening Well, as I have said, I've gone through it. I find that the use of imagery is good, certainly your reference to chains and bondage and isolation. But ...

Good evening. Well, here I am reading chapter 2 and I'm once again finding no real problems with it, it's a good length, with good pacing and it held my ...

Name: Aramanda (Manda to friends) Gender: Female Race: Human Position on ship: Engineer Age: 19 Appearance: Tale and wiry frame with dark mahogany eyes and sweeping dark hair which she ...

Good evening. First I would like to start off by saying that I am not very good at analysing poems, so I can merely give you my opinion, not a ...

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