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(Sorry Amber, my mistake) Kaladore quickly found a place to lye down and take a nap. All the fighting had worn him out. Still, he couldn't help but wonder what ...

Thank you for all of your feed back, I really appreciate it. I'll do my best in the future to come. ~Spades

Kaladore stood back to back with Lila as they were surrounded by five men. "Man, what a pain this is." "Less talking and for butt kicking!" Yelled Lila as she ...

Brief brief brief. It's good, much like your prologue, but I need something, something concrete. You have no foundation to it. Plot, I need a plot. Let me say that ...

Seventeen years, a short life to many, but for me it's seventeen years too long. So much left to see and yet I've seen enough. So much left to do ...

Kaldore ducked behind a building on the outskirts of the town just as the arrows began to fall. Looking out he saw Lila running for cover, but noticed she wouldn't ...

Kaladore looked upon the burning town and sighed, "And here I thought we'd be able to have an easy assignment, but I guess nothing can be so simple when you're ...

You have grabbed my interest. I think that's something all authors like to hear right? Any way, I feel you can really expand on this which is good, but I ...

name- Thomas Anthony (Tom) age- 18 gender- Male rank- Son of a US Republican Senator. grade- Senior appearance- history- When Thomas was born his father was already a well known ...

Kaladore quickly got bored and was soon nodding off. He whispered softly to his horse calming it's trot so it was moving more smoothly. Finally comfortable he laid forward in ...

Potential, I do see a lot of potential here. As stated above it does feel like a raw copy. Now I have something to add to what the one above ...

Name: Kaladore Refee Age: Twenty Gender: Male Personality: Unmotivated and down to earth. He's not one to put effort into things and rarely will go out of his way for ...

Have to say I enjoyed It very much. A lot of feeling in this, and good imagery was used as well. I really only have one thing to point out. ...

Well that's some welcome wagon, thank you. I'll Do my best to answer every one's questions. MeadowLark: I do in fact write mostly fantasy, but I also enjoy writing realistic ...

Good evening, morning, or afternoon. The name is JackfSpades, but you can just call me Spade for short... and for the record no, my real name is not Jack. I'm ...