Jack

You sound like me when it comes to writing poetry depending on your mood. But, anyway. Hello Malu (If I may so bold as to call you that) I'm Jack. ...

Hmm... I'm not exactly the "poetry" kinda guy, but this seemed pretty well-written. Although, the only thing that I think you should work on, if you seriously want to live ...

babies (some, at least)

Welcome welcome. :)

I've been on here forever and haven't posted this yet. I could have sworn I did, but I guess not. Here you go. ------ “Do you even know where we ...

:shock: OMG!! I can't believe I haven't commented on here yet. And I'm the one beta-ed (sp?) it in the first place!!! :shock: For shame... Ah well, I liked it ...