JaceClayton

Enh, I don't think it really needs any work. You know I love it so :]

Thanks DayDreams! I really do appreciate it :] And snoopysoap, Grr those typos haha. But I'll get on them. Thanks again :] And the second chapter should be up fairly ...

Thanks :]]]

Thanks you everyone for giving me advice and praising my work. I really appreciate it!

Oh. My. YES. This is probably one of the most amazing things I have ever read. The voice is so perfectly spoken and the short choppy sentences make for that. ...

AMAZING! I usually don't like rhyming poetry, but I ADORED this :]]] Post more material like this!

Oh my god. That was AMAZING. Seriously. The structure and diction just blew my mind. And my mind loved it.

Enjambment was very well done. I loved you're continuation of space vocabulary. Gorgeous.

I thought this was dark and twisted, and I'm not going to lie. I kind of loved it. I wasn't confused at all. I was just, captivated by the story. ...

THIS. IS. THE. MOST. EPIC. THING. EVARRRRRRRRRRRR!!!!!!! LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE IT!!!!

This is the beginning of a story I've been writing for a few weeks now. It's nowhere near complete, but I thought I'd post it on here. Any and all ...

Rephaim Chapter One: Lover, You're So Amusing Yet Oh So Confusing "And tonight, I want you all to write a short story of your choice." The bell rang at its ...

I thought this was pretty amazing. At points I was laughing hysterically by how blunt and honest you were being, and when it comes to this touchy of a subject, ...

So, this is my first time posting on a site like this. I hope you can leave me comments on how to improve my work.

Gorgeous diction and imagery! Your enjambment excites me.