JaceClayton

Hi, Sporks! Thank you for reviewing this chapter. I really value the opinion of everyone on this site and am extremely glad when people decide to view my work. Yeah, ...

Thank you all for your advice and reviews! I appreciate it more than you know. I really need to get better at "setting up a surrounding" as I've been told, ...

Haha, I only described the gemstones that are worth mentioning, meaning the ones that actually are going to be relevant. However, I might take you up on the advice and ...

This is Chapter Two of Nowhere, entitled "The Glass Ballerina". *This is a flashback chapter* “The Glass Ballerina” “If you get the vase, I promise you, I’ll give you the ...

Hi, Quasi! You did such a lovely review of my piece that I thought I'd return the favor :]. Let me start by saying you have an excellent opening line. ...

This is Chapter Two of Nowhere, entitled "The Glass Ballerina". Happy reading ;D. *Flashback* “The Glass Ballerina” “If you get the vase, I promise you, I’ll give you the journal.” ...

Thank you so much for your interest, Quasi! And you're the first person to like my choppy style haha. I tend to use it a lot. I don't know why, ...

Thank both of you for commenting! Snoink, yes, I do realize there is an over-emphasis on gemstone based coloring. However, this is for a specific reason which should become apparent ...

“Wreckage” Her deep, dark amethyst eyes flew open in shock, her slender frame aching with agony. She felt her breathing elevate, gasps spilling from her simple lips and filling her ...

“Wreckage” Her deep, dark amethyst eyes flew open in shock, her slender frame aching with agony. She felt her breathing elevate, gasps spilling from her simple lips and filling her ...

Gor.Ge.Ous! I loved it. Beautiful imagery and nice flow.

Thank you to everyone for reviewing this piece. It was a dedication to someone whom I recently lost, and I'm very glad it was commented on. Thanks again.

This was such a powerful piece. Now is when I wish there was a love button. So I'mma make one *creates a bangin love button, then clicks it several times*

Thank you so much! I really appreciate your comment. This was very emotional poem to write and it means a lot that you thought so highly of it. Thank you.

It started out as technological love, Limited to Internet kisses And strokes on a keyboard instead of cheeks. The romance we ignited Was kept in the mechanical heart of our ...