JabberHut

I want to just hug you, Kitty! Your reviews are amazing! You would think I'd learn. ^_~ Oh, what am I saying? *hugs Kitty tightly* I always knew kitties were ...

It's actually shorter than the other chapters and prologue. ^_^; Sorry if it seems more overwhelming. I tend to write long chapters. An idea per chapter. This chapter is about ...

Thanks for all your wonderful reviews! Wellmanwriter--thanks for catching those. ^_^ I'm known for switching tenses. >_< I'll fix them ASAP and I'll let you know when I post more ...

Thanks for reading, everyone! kshsj777--Explain the ending? I wish I could...lol scotty.knows--(love your name ^_^ reminds me of Star Trek) I, unfortunately, tend to switch up my tenses. >_< I'll ...

Thank you very much, everyone! Chayonz--I'm glad you liked it. It was a random piece sitting in my head. I wrote it out so I wouldn't have to think about ...

To tell the truth, I got much better reviews than I thought (and more are welcome!). I don't know if there'll be more. I was having a brain fart with ...

Thanks a lot for the crits. They helped A LOT. I, unfortunately (forgetting to mention this before) wrote this late at night. :oops: There were plenty of mistakes that don't ...

Thank you everyone for editing my paper. I have good feelings for this paper for the first time in my entire life of writing high school papers. ^^ And I ...

Okay, for school I have to write a paper based on the book "Of Mice and Men" by John Steinbeck. The assignment: A literary critic once said, "All characters in ...

Thanks sooo much for the crits! I would be happy to return the favor! Just PM me! Fantasyartist-- I edited the story to show the reader, but her title is ...

Thanks much for the critiques. After reading Clau's I had to reread it for the umpteenth time. I nearly killed myself. I rewrote the story and put it up. New ...

Thank you for the crits, everyone, 'specially you, Kitty. That was super long and must have taken time. I really apologize for all those grammatic issues. I'm never that bad! ...

Thanks for reviewing it. I made those changes. Other reviews are welcome! :D

K, after getting some better comments on my Chatper 1, I shall post Chapter 2! (then work on homework... :( ) anyway, here ya go. I hope it's well. Please ...

Yes, DW, I'm sorry that the chapters are all close together and a bit dizzy at first. When I first posted chapter one, I already had most of the story ...