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Which... is different from X152... it is different? ...oh shoot. GOOD EXAMPLE JABBER THAT IS CONFUSING" hahaha rip my poor little dyscalculic brain. LOL I AM SO SORRY I tried ...

Thanks for the review! I know I say this every time, but your reviews are just so darn helpful and also manage to be super encouraging at the same time! ...

So, I actually discovered this review when I was taking a break from writing Chapter 8 and I actually just wrote this all out... but it turned into a massive ...

Ahaha I did expect you to comment on it ;) And I'm glad you did! I was honestly struggling with what punctuation to put there. It felt like a huge ...

Fair point! I was thinking of this as, if she wasn't King's Assassin, she could just kinda lounge around the palace like her cousins (minus Rek xD) do. She /IS/ ...

DUDE they sound awesome ! They sound like a significant resource however they may be used, so I definitely would be on board with that! All part of the world-building ...

omg I'm so using that for a nerdy character's brain fact

Yeah, she's 17 and he's 12 (ish... I'm still nailing down exact ages for both of them but several-development-milestones-ahead-of-him either way). She cares about him intensely, but I wouldn't really ...

Clearly I've been using gifs. All these [/img] tags popping up everywhere what even

See I originally wrote this with the idea that Zaire was gonna be like "Oh crap, I made the decision to bring Teryn along and now they are going to ...

Ooh okay, that makes more sense. So she was in the process of handing him her bow, she hadn't fully handed it over to him yet. (Alternatively, she could have ...

Ahhhh yay! I'm glad I was somewhat correct then. And "dissociate" was totally the word I was looking for and failing to find hahahaha. 'Cause that does totally explain the ...

BATTLEMENTS!!!! Omg I love you! I could NOT for the life of me figure out what they were called but you are exactly right!! AHHHH YAY YOU'RE WELCOME!! :D Thanks ...

This is a fair point! In this draft, her lieutenant and her squire are both far more important characters than they were in the last draft. I was worried that ...

That's an awesome idea!! It helps SO much to make even minor characters feel much more real, and your main cast will even interact with those characters so much easier ...