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Re: Forty Degrees Celsium - Chapter 1
Hi, Shinda! Sorry for the wait. You wouldn't believe how many things decided to get in the way! I like where this is going. I especially love how it jumps ...
Nov 29, 2011 -
Re: Mathew_Beta.exe (2 of 2)
Back! And I apologize for being the like number 13. I realize how unlucky this could be, but I'm going to try to make it the luckiest unlucky experience ever. ...
Nov 25, 2011 -
Re: Mathew_Beta.exe (1 of 2)
Hi, Joshua! Sorry for being a tad late. Things needed to be done, and I didn't see them coming! But basically, I loved this. And I don't have much constructive ...
Nov 25, 2011 -
Re: Death of the Night
Hi, Mikster! I'm not a poet, but I can certainly leave behind some thoughts. ;) First of all, I loved your imagery. Like... you painted a gorgeous picture. I loved ...
Nov 20, 2011 -
Re: letting go
Hi, TennisPrincess! 8D So this is, like. the cutest thing ever. Seriously, it was fantastic! I loved the happy-ending, and the story itself was going in an awesome direction. In ...
Nov 8, 2011 -
Re: Beginning to End
Hi, Rachel! 8D This was a very well-written song. The story certainly was told from beginning to end, so I found it pleasant to just read. I'm certain it'll feel ...
Nov 7, 2011 -
Re: Book Name: Wolf's Graceful Heart: Prologue
Hey, Speck! I'm here as requested. :D So I really like this! It's definitely a typical beginning chosen for fantasy stories, but I do enjoy the bedtime stories like this. ...
Nov 2, 2011 -
Re: How To Crash A Wedding
Mein Lumichu!
Oct 30, 2011 -
Re: Forever Young
Hiiiiiiiiii, SparkleDoubt! (No lie: I almost called you DramaLlama.) SO. I love this! Maybe it's just me and my preference to happy songs, but this was very beautiful and had ...
Oct 30, 2011 -
Re: it's all melted away.
Hello! Here as I said I would! 8D A bit later than intended, but I'm still here! So I definitely think this is one of your best works here. I ...
Oct 30, 2011 -
Re: Intimacies
Hi, M&M&M! I'm actually here as I said I would be! Now, I'm not much of a poet, so my suggestions can be taken lightly. I did, however, enjoy what ...
Oct 30, 2011 -
Re: The setting sun
Mikster! 8D Sorry for the slight delay. I was finishing a homework assignment! SO. I read this. (no durh, sherlock.) At first, I was like "guuuh, this is going to ...
Oct 27, 2011 -
Re: Atlantis - Prologue
Hello! 8D I like your prologue here! It's very interesting, and you clearly have a direction in mind. I think how you ended it is awesome, and it's a great ...
Oct 24, 2011 -
Re: Clouds
Heylo! Here as I said I would be. ;) So this is very interesting! I actually enjoyed the narration that was going on, the style. I was a bit woah-wait ...
Oct 21, 2011 -
Re: The Magnificent Humphrey Wolf Adams (Part One)
Hi! I'm sorry this came later than intended. I can't really begin to explain how many distracting distractions got in the way! So I usually don't go through grammarchecks, but ...
Oct 21, 2011
