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Jerica is really beating herself up for being scared of a dragon. She seems to have this unconscious demeanor where she is just apologetic about showing any sign of weakness ...

omg bonus points for using the word "shale". good god more points for using "acerbic". AND "SCUTES". OMG. You must be a wiz at Scrabble. XD I wonder how the ...

How long is her hair? I thought it was a bit short. But to be able to makea bun -- without a hair tie, no less -- must mean it's ...

HELLO! I enjoyed the previous chapter with the fighting and things. There wasn't much to add to it as it was pretty straightforward. I'm kind of shocked he was so ...

I don't normally point out grammatical errors as I usually believe that's saved for last. But the bold made me laugh: Not many people knew how hold she was with ...

Ohhh, I loved this chapter. I liked this memory. So she knows about Dragon Keepers already. I should probably go back instead of ask this, but my coffee hasn't kicked ...

STORY TIME YAY. They seem to all consistently refer to it as an Ability, but I don't really know what that is still. Her ability to fight? Is that all? ...

I'm a little confused as to the layout of her location. Just a little lost. I'm kinda just taking the narration's word for it. I thought she was deep into ...

OKAY well at least it's the last of her strength, though she shouldn't have any left to fight against the magic. I do like that she's acting on adrenaline, so ...

Poor Jerica. She's gonna end up with some brain damage after all this. I'm glad it was mentioned how long it's been. It hasn't felt like two days since she ...

I LOVE THAT SHE GETS SICK FROM TRANSPORTING. It's such a huge weakness that could be used later. I did kinda wish that the Nykerians just kinda mocked her for ...

OOOH YES! They came to rescue her! I wonder how they managed to just run out of the camp without any Atraian soldiers noticing them? I guess they ran out ...

WOO! So we got some answers in these two chapters, and I am tremendously pleased to be getting some clues as to what's going on. It keeps the intrigue going! ...

HELLO AGAIN! My day got away from me, so I can only go through one chapter today. I like that we jump straight into the Nykerian camp, a direct follow-up ...

GETTING MY FOOT IN THE DOOR! :D I'll try to leave an occasional review every couple chapters or so to give you an idea what's going through my head as ...