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Heya, Idra! This was pretty cool, I thought! I enjoyed writing these kinds of poems way back whenever. The poems with a metaphor through the whole thing. They're considered fairly ...

Hi! I am here as requested in an attempt to say something helpful. :D The imagery was pretty! (And it wasn't just the mention of rainbows, though that is an ...

Hello again! You will be my 650th review (and my newest blue star) so I'm freaking excited! :D So my review in the last prologue can also apply here. However, ...

Jess Jess was absolutely excited about this venture, mainly because she wasn't eaten alive like she was afraid she would be. And she might get a free apple out of ...

Hi, fullmetal! (This makes me think of Fullmetal Alchemist. woot!) There's not much to this prologue. D: Maybe if I read part 2, it'll make a little more sense. (Consider ...

Solvalery went like-happy! She's liked this post 3 times somehow. D: Not sure if there's a way to fix the like bug going on. Let me know if I bug ...

I can always count on Larvitar to point these things out to me!

I am here once again! Are you sick of me yet? :D I will admit that after this entire time, only now do I picture the Black/White Swans as actual ...

Hello, hello! I enjoyed this as well as the other two. I think it's the whole seven-year-old perspective that's really selling this to me. Typically, we see all these terrible ...

I am back again! This part has made me very happy in a number of ways. Probably because I was waiting for this for a while and was pleased we ...

Hi! I am here to save the kitten from certain death dinner! So you already knew I adore this. And if you didn't already know, now you do! The youthful ...

Hello! I'm here as requested. :D (And attempting to think up something new to say after all the reviews you've gotten already! Though I haven't read all of them either, ...

Hi, Dasia! I'll try to review this chapter by chapter. Grammar check for chapter one will be in the spoiler. It took me a while though, and a lot of ...

Hello, you two! I'm here with mediocre poem skills, but hopefully I'll have at least something helpful to mention. One can always hope anyway! It's unfortunate this isn't finished yet, ...

Hi, guys! I'm here to get whatever feedback I can muster. Basically, I found this adorable. No matter what you do to it, your siblings are going to absolutely love ...