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Hi, Lele! You did a very good job with this song. The message was extremely clear, and the imagery used was fantastic. You've got some great stuff -- awesome moments ...

Hi again, Dolwright! This song is incredibly sad. :( It kinda hit me somewhere inside 'cause I know where the speaker's coming from. I can only imagine what they're feeling. ...

Hello again, Sare! So I most certainly and indefinitely loved this piece. I thought it provided a very new concept. Seriously! I was eating my hamburger while reading this, and ...

Heya, Card! I very much liked this! You've got an excellent grasp on imagery and metaphors. Very, very awesome! The others pointed out all those good, yummy parts, so I ...

Hey, Strawberry! :D You've got a very nice poem. The mood is very strong through the speaker's voice, which very well set the stage for what this poem is about. ...

Heya, DramaLlama! ;) Very nice piece you have here. It's sad but well-written! The voice comes through very clearly, and you used your images very well for your message. Awesome! ...

Hi, Mikko! I loved your piece here. I can tell that you switched it a bit from poetry to lyrics. Whether that's good or bad, I've no idea! There were ...

Hey, Lele! So this song is absolutely adorable. XD I loved it to bits. The story behind it was clear, the imagery was very good, and it just worked very ...

Hello for the umpteenth time, Lies! :D So there's a lot of repetition in this song, and it might be personal preference, but I feel like it bogs down the ...

Hello, Sare! You've got a very neat song, and it's cool how you've used questions to tell the message moreso than stories or such. It kind of gets the listeners ...

Hi, dolwright! This was a cute song you've got, and I think it was set up very well! I've noticed you didn't find a title yet, so I'll see if ...

Hi, Abyss! I absolutely loved this. Your style is fantastic. All the imagery, the Christian references -- I read this, and I just liked it more and more. You've got ...

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Hello once again! You always post such interesting pieces. You've got a huge variety of genres in your lyrics, and I think that's extremely awesome. This one in particular was ...

Hi, AJ! :D So this song is alright. I've read better work from you, but this is okay! It's more fluffy though, I think. There's not enough meat in it. ...