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Re: Drown Me
Hi, Zombie! You've really got fantastic imagery, which is undoubtedly where that emotion is coming from. You had some really great moments, too, with the way you phrase certain lines ...
Dec 8, 2011 -
Re: YWS Fanfiction Contest -- Holiday Edition
Collaborations are perfectly fine! But the prizes will have to be split among you. :)
Dec 8, 2011 -
Re: What the moon is made of...
Hi, SparkleDoubt! 8D So what you have here is extremely pretty! You have some gorgeous imagery, and it paints such a lovely picture. It's really just gorgeous! There were some ...
Dec 8, 2011 -
Re: YWS Holiday Contests
Hey, everyone! Thought the celebrations were over, huh? SILLY GOOSE. geese. Geese? SILLY GEESE. hm. Anyway. YWS is hosting two lovely contests to help celebrate the holiday season! So fix ...
Dec 8, 2011 -
Re: YWS Fanfiction Contest -- Holiday Edition
YWS Fanfiction Contest -- Holiday Edition How would you and your YWS friends celebrate the holidays? It's that time of year! Everyone wants to celebrate the holidays in a variety ...
Dec 8, 2011 -
Re: Home//Twinkle
MIKSTER. 8D Home This was adorable. XD So cute. I really love the message behind it. darling I'm not homeless 'cause your heart is my home, This is, like. the ...
Dec 8, 2011 -
Re: A Life Chosen or Given Part 3
And I'm back! 8D It's definitely getting more interesting! I like hearing some of the backstory for the characters now. There was some confusion as to whether or not Catherine ...
Dec 8, 2011 -
Re: A Life Chosen or Given Part 2
Yay, part 2! Sooo. I like this. I actually enjoyed the action sequence if only because I haven't read a legit action sequence in a... while. oO People usually skip ...
Dec 8, 2011 -
Re: Filter
Hi, AJ! Back for more. 8D I'm glad I'm hitting these. You were talking about them in chat, and I was interested in reading them. So yay! I have found ...
Dec 8, 2011 -
Re: A Life Chosen or Given
Isabella! 8D So I really like where this is going. I really love gunslinger stories. They're just so... cool. In fact, this felt a lot like a western. I don't ...
Dec 8, 2011 -
Re: Labyrinth of Days
Hi, Creative! Your song is very pretty! You have a lot of really well-done imagery. It's so pretty, and you paint the picture very well! I can see it very ...
Dec 8, 2011 -
Re: Somewhere Brighter
Hi, Dancer! So I have to say that for a first-timer, this was really well done. There some gorgeous moments in here that are just... really awesome. Much kudos to ...
Dec 7, 2011 -
Re: I Once Knew A Man (Boom ba bang)
Hi, Lover! ;) The song's got quite a humorous/satirical feel to it, which is a very interesting take on it. (Basically, my mind says, "Oh, one of those songs." xD) ...
Dec 7, 2011 -
Re: Repent
Hi, AJ! I can tell it's not your best work, but I can certainly tell what you were trying to do. The song itself tied in with the title just ...
Dec 7, 2011 -
Re: Waitin'
Hi, Amy! So I had to look up Amy Winehouse to get a feel for this. I never heard her before, but she certainly has a very unique style that ...
Dec 7, 2011
