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Hey, Dasia! This is my first review on the new YWS, so feel honored! I'm rather excited, and hopefully, I won't give such a flimsy review or anything full of ...

Due to the extended period of site down-time, the contest deadline for Fiction/Poetry has also been extended to December 30, 2011 . Enjoy your holidays, and I look forward to ...

MIKSTER! I'm baaaack! I got your request, but I had a busy day; so I'm a tad late, but I definitely looked forward to reading it. I finally did, and ...

Kristine | Sin's Penthouse Kristine took a bite of her pizza just as Sam leaned back in his seat with a sharp outtake of breath. She looked at him, Sam ...

Hi, SparkleDoubt! :D This is absolutely adorable, and I think your mom is going to love this entirely. Just... It's adorable. XD So adorable. I love it. and even as ...

Blake | Lein's Shop/Home The old man was leaving? Blake watched the door carefully, his mind racing. He could leave, too. Just up and go. Run far away from anyone ...

Hi, Amy! :D You've got a very good story here. It's told very well, and it all flowed rather smoothly. Very nice job in holding to the plot! And keeping ...

Hi, Emily! Considering it's your first time writing a script, I think this went rather well. The characters really came through, and with scripts, it depends a lot on the ...

Hi, AJ! I'm back! :D This isn't one of your best works, but it's not one of your worst either. It's definitely getting somewhere, and with a little work, it ...

Hi, Robster! There's definitely a rhythm in the song, so I wouldn't worry much on that! The two songs you linked did help put this into perspective though, so danke! ...

Hi, Mike! This was really awesome with such a very strong message, and you refer to a lot of historical aspects to bring this alive even more. That's really, really ...

Hi, Searria! I agree with everyone that this was very well done. It pulled me in, oddly enough. The voice was very good! There was a lot of character in ...

Hey, Singer! ;) So I like the idea you have behind this. It's a very good message, but you also play with it very well! I really like the "Hey ...

Hi, River! Ooh, I know what you mean about the rhyme thing. I'm always rhyming with my songs for some reason. It just feels better! But there are a lot ...

MIKSTER. So apparently, this is kind of bumping an older song, and hopefully you still have a desire to receive reviews on it. Honestly, I really loved this piece. Sooo ...