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Hi, AJ! I saw your piece here and thought I'd stop by! I found this to be rather repetitive, but ignoring that and looking at what you actually have in ...

Hi, Telle! This song was very cute! You definitely had some giddy emotion in there with the imagery and tone. In fact, if I got the impression of your story ...

Hey, Still! I'm back! :D I'm actually curious about your style! It's a bit unique from what I've seen. Do you, perhaps, have some examples of songs/music that would best ...

Hi, Dasia! So my thoughts are a bit backwards here compared to the usual! I feel like your message is VERY clear here. There's just a lack of imagery and... ...

Hi, Still! You've got some good moments here that work very well. That is, the flow is very nice! It's well-put together. :D Doesn't matter how much you give, someone ...

Back again, Allinall! :D So the first thought that came to mind as soon as I finished was, "That's it?!" I wanted more! XD I felt unsatisfied with the story ...

Hi, Dasia! You've been cranking these out like there's no tomorrow! There seems to be trend in that I'm, again, not as impressed as I am with some of your ...

Hi, allinall! You've got a very interesting piece here! In fact, in a depressing way, it's very beautiful. You've got a lot of good things in here -- lots of ...

Hi, Dasia! This certainly isn't one of your best works, and I think there was some contradiction here and there that I'll point out. HOWEVER, I think you've got some ...

Hi, Mikster! I don't know French (I assume it's French, anyway. XD), so I won't be of as much use as you probably would like, but I can totes work ...

Aaaand the votes have been gathered! Woot-woot! ---- Most Likely to be a Janitor: Bolt Yyyyyup. YWS Clown: Demeter She’s such a gamer! Most Spirited: Snoink Snoink! Snoink! She’s our ...

Here as I said I would be! I'll apologize ahead of time though since I'm not much of a poet, and thus, I probably have no idea what I'm saying ...

Carmina Burana. 8) But any watch alarm that goes off? Like, the annoying tiny beeping alarm on wristwatches? Gives me a freaking HEART ATTACK 'cause that was the alarm I ...

Hi, Mistie! :D I find you have a very nice idea. In fact, it has a lot of potential. It's an interesting concept. Usually, you find stories like these to ...

Hey, Dasia! I don't have much to add on this song. I think it's very simple and nice, really! Simplicity can be very good, and I think your song benefits ...