JabberHut

I'm getting into this story, really! I like how you ended in that cliffhanger. I do that all the time, keeps people wanting more! lol. Cammie and I instinctively looked ...

I'm getting into this story, really! I like how you ended in that cliffhanger. I do that all the time, keeps people wanting more! lol. Cammie and I instinctively looked ...

lol, I'm glad this story is to your liking. I was a bit worried. I never written a western before. I took your advice and put the link in my ...

omg omg omg!!! your my new favorite author!!!! kidding, but i do love this piece. it certainly made my evening more enjoyable!

Oh, I liked it! You're slowly improving on the details, I'm impressed. It could still use some more. There is not much else to say, except keep it going! I'm ...

Chapter 7 I explained to Deputy Luke and Brie what happened last night. They both listened intently. Deputy Luke gasped and watched me fearfully as I recalled the events. Brie ...

Okay, for school I have to write a paper based on the book "Of Mice and Men" by John Steinbeck. The assignment: A literary critic once said, "All characters in ...

You got a good thing going here, ninja! I'm excited! I know you'll hate me for saying this, cause everyone covered it, but it could use some more detail. it's ...

Very nice! I liked it. Knowing Star Wars and how they do the summary in the beginning, i think the prologue works wonderfully. Because this galaxy had contact with Star ...

Greetings, my friend! Well, because I'm a bit bored, I thought I would read your story, and I loved it! However, I did notice some mistakes, and take to consideration ...

Thank you very much for the tips, I'll take them into consideration!

Okay, for school I have to write a paper based on the book "Of Mice and Men" by John Steinbeck. The assignment: A literary critic once said, "All characters in ...

I liked it a lot. I like how you left those ends loose yet just tight enough for me to want to read more and get the answers. You got ...

Here's some more. chapter 6. Chapter 6 The next day, we put my plan into action. Brie couldn’t help because of her wanted help at the saloon, so it was ...

Oh good, at least I know the story wasn't abandoned or anything. Thanks for catching the gramatical errors. :D I'm really bad at that...here's chapter 5. Chapter 5 I stayed ...