JabberHut

I would say capitalize because "the Queen" is the name you are giving the person. That is her title and, therefore, should be capitalized. If that is what the main ...

Okay, I wrote this chapter about a week ago when I was completely bored. I wasn't sure whether to put this in historical fiction or science fiction, but with some ...

This was wonderful. It definitly kept going. Very nice! Continue it and let me know when you've made the next part! I honestly have no comments here, except to keep ...

K, I'm not good at critiquing poems and songs and stuff. However, I did like your work here. When I read the second song, I got a bit lost. I ...

Okay, for a while I couldn't get into the site and was completely bored cause I had nothing to critique. Then I said to myself "write a story, dork" so ...

Wow. I really like this story! You did an awesome job in writing it. I have only a couple comments to make. I can't wait for some more! Maybe Mom ...

Hi, Saphira! Remember me? I dunno if you do or not, but here I am and I thought I would critique your story. :D Soldiers poured out of every door, ...

Ooh, I like it! Sorry I haven't critiqued this yet, but here I am! I shall critique! Anyway... “Now come on this is important.” A comma after "on" “What is ...

I'm a Christian (Lutheran specifically) but I respect everyone equally, despite their religion. Christianity has a lot of "mini-religions", if you will, so i guess it could be tough for ...

I seriously have nothing to say except...This chapter was amazing! You really improved, it totally caught my attention. I'm all for it! I felt what the characters felt throughout the ...

Can I post a story that's religious based? I didn't want to start posting it until I know for sure if I could. I don't want to cause any trouble.

This is the last and final chapter. It took lots of work and still may not be finished, but it's what I got at the moment, so enjoy. Please comment ...

Here's the fun part. I hope you enjoy! :D Chapter 10 The next morning, I heard footsteps sounding in the other room and voices ringing, talking about their leaving for ...

This chapter is not as exciting as it has been, but you'll get through it, I swear! It'll be worth it in the end! This just shows that my characters ...

Very well written! I liked it! She made her way to the bar. The barman wiped the tabletop and didn't look up. I may be a bit picky, but I ...