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Thanks for reviewing it. I made those changes. Other reviews are welcome! :D

A Christmas Story November 23, 2000 “Is he alright?” “Yes, Jennifer, he—he’ll be alright.” “Mama, why are you crying?” Mama only shook her head, dabbed her eyes with her hanky, ...

Stop trying to apologize :wink: I just read the comment at a bad time. I was working on homework and had writer's block when i read it. I won't go ...

I've written since, maybe, 11 years of age, but I never shared it, so i never got criticized about my writings. I'm glad I joined YWS recently, cause now I'm ...

K, after getting some better comments on my Chatper 1, I shall post Chapter 2! (then work on homework... :( ) anyway, here ya go. I hope it's well. Please ...

'Tis my friend, Badger! Howdy-doo! O_O i never said that before...anyway, I shall critique, though it's 8 in the morning. we'll see what happens :wink: The acidic water made his ...

I much liked it, Clau, very nice rythem set, indeed. (i have trouble spelling that rythem word. grr...) Anyway, I told you before, Clau: Cannibalism is bad for your health; ...

lol, I loved that story! It was so cute, it made me laugh, especially the beginning couple paragraphs. One day a long time ago, in a galaxy far, far, away, ...

This was difficult after some thinking about the question... I prefer hardback books because I dont have to worry about how fragile they are, cause they're not as fragile as ...

My friend Alanna told me about this site. At first, I didn't understand and never went on, but now it's like my second home! I love you all!

...you're really really scaring me, you know that? Anyway...I hope your business runs well! :wink: P.S. Don't kill me!

K, I was listening to this piano solo by Lorie Line and decided, what the heck, I'll make up my own lyrics. They just came out at me. I hope ...

Yes, DW, I'm sorry that the chapters are all close together and a bit dizzy at first. When I first posted chapter one, I already had most of the story ...

Thank you everyone for the comments! I perfectly agree that the intro really was not the bset. That's usually not how I write, but I couldn't think of any way ...

I like your story very much! (sorry for the late comment. Dang chatroom!) I'm excited for more. There were only a couple things I discovered. Kwest brought the Dagger to ...