JabberHut

Hey, Linds! I saw this and I jsut had to read it. Just point out a couple things. Forgive me if I repeat anything. Kill me later if I'm rude. ...

Thanks much for the critiques. After reading Clau's I had to reread it for the umpteenth time. I nearly killed myself. I rewrote the story and put it up. New ...

although every second that passed in solitary silence felt do damn wasted This confused me. Try reading it allowed. "Do" may just have to be deleted. you loose all sense ...

I like this! New identities, and lots of shtuff going on! Just a few pointers I'd like to make: She’s a slicer Could you explain what a slicer does? Eol’s ...

Hey, DW! I was just looking through and found this one. You're lacking reviews! Sid did cover some good points though. Let's see what I come up with... *reads* The ...

I found this story rather interesting. It certainly caught my attention. (You're the author of Hunter Garrett! I just had to read this!) But, on a serious note, this is ...

Very nice, Sleuthchick! ShadowTwit already covered a lot of the grammar issues. I'll just make a few pointers: "Blakleigh, no one would believe that a petite and shy girl would ...

Hello, I do believe we've met in the Chat, but I can't be too certain. In an operating theater illuminated by fluorescent lighting, emergency room surgeons frantically compressed the chest ...

Very well done! I really like this story--'tis going along very well! :D I sigh, frustrated, and sit on my knees, wiping the wet dirt on my now dingy gown ...

Thank you for the crits, everyone, 'specially you, Kitty. That was super long and must have taken time. I really apologize for all those grammatic issues. I'm never that bad! ...

This is really amazing, Clau! It certainly made my day. I found this section still very amusing. The Pat Buchanen comment was priceless. XD Again his eyebrow raised, “Why-double you-ess?” ...

You're my savior, Nate! I would like to read an HP book and figure the ending out for myself for a change.

I liked this one. I was feeling a bit sane and somber myself, so I easily stuck with this story. Very well written. I never knew pure dialogue could do ...

I wrote this one late night. I don't think it's that wonderful, but I could be wrong. I never know if my work's good 'til I'm commented on. I'll definitely ...

Wonderful story! I thought you did an excellent job. I only spotted a couple grammar issues. I also don't know exactly what kind of accent you're looking for, but I ...