JabberHut

Dang...i'm on lists. :shock: Yay! ^^ I feel loved! okay, order, i swear! *panics* 1. Lindsay (Staring_at_Ceiling)--the first person/friend i've ever met on YWS, plus, well, who doesn't know? :lol: ...

Oh, goodie! #6! *begins to read* he saw the lack of windows in the house and blinds drawn on those it did have This is a bit chunky. Maybe change ...

*sigh* I'm finally here to crit. Sorry, but i had soooo much work to do. But now I can sit and do something enjoyable for a change. *begins to read* ...

India? That's awesome! Hi, I'm Jabber. *holds out hand* I didn't leave you out. ^^ But, it is another example how it would be difficult to get EVERYONE together in ...

That's the thing. All parents are different, we don't know what they'll say and, hopefully, they know how dangerous internet can really be. They will be very precautious and it'll ...

Thank you everyone for editing my paper. I have good feelings for this paper for the first time in my entire life of writing high school papers. ^^ And I ...

Okay, for school I have to write a paper based on the book "Of Mice and Men" by John Steinbeck. The assignment: A literary critic once said, "All characters in ...

I have dreams about that, Alice. However, I, as well as many others, know it to be impossible for the ENTIRE YWS to get together in ONE place. Maybe all ...

You say it sucks, but I say it's pretty good. You show imagry, it's quick and painless to read. You set out the basic idea pretty easily. Then again, I'm ...

Hey! Came to crit, but I'm critting and I'm going on 25 hours without sleep. :D Just bear with me. ^^ Wordlessly, the man sat joined Kemal at the table ...

Hello! I'm back to crit your second part. ^_^ *begins to read* Crescent View High school was the most segregate school on the planet; racially and socially . "Segregate" should ...

Hey! I'm finally on so I'd be happy to crit for ya! ^^ They sat down on the soft, plastoid-cushioned seats VERY good jog with the description. You say you ...

I'm here!!! Omg, I finished my homework and have enough time for some crit! Yes! I sooo wanted to read this! Anyway, time to read! Yay! *begins to read* He ...

I usually critique: 1. That story (or w/e) has hardly any crits or replies 2. That person asked me to crit for them 3. I'm completely bored and needed something ...

I usually critique: 1. That story (or w/e) has hardly any crits or replies 2. That person asked me to crit for them 3. I'm completely bored and needed something ...