JabberHut

Nutty! I'm-a-crittin'! And I'm on a role! :twisted: But, seriously, if you don't like my crit, you can destroy me in chat. :wink: It was more a strip of course ...

Hey, Gladius! I'm finally getting this crit in. ^^; ...cap had stayed in place; for some strange reason not ... Meh, use a period instead of a semi. :wink: “I ...

Here's your second crit, my dear friend. ^_^ phone calls had already been [s]phoned[/s] made ,... Sounds better than the repetition of "phone." ^_^ ...and contacts had already been contacted ...

Hey, Audy! Let’s see what you have here…I usually read while I crit. Sometimes I’ll comment on something, but later on I’ll find the answer and say so. Lol, it’s ...

Hey, Gladius! Ooh, a Christmas chapter? Exciting! I'll try to do as much as I can tonight. ^_^ “She couldn’t have gone far, sir . ” The sergeant assured , ...

I'm interested in your story! ^_^ I think your idea for Moon Children and Sky is wonderful! I think the characters are fine. Especially in such a small group of ...

Hey! I'm really sorry I haven't gotten to this. :oops: I'm usually on top of my crits, but it's the Christmas season. ^^; I've been busy. But, here I am! ...

Heylo! ^_^ The young girl’s mother rushed to the scene, trying to get her to shut up and take the photo. No mother would tell her daughter to 'shut-up'. She'd ...

I never really crit lyrics and stuff, but I saw this. It's really good, it made me laugh! :lol: I'm more of a grammar geek, btw. There's be some punctuation ...

I wrote a Christmas story about six months ago and it was really sad, so I wanted to write another. The idea turned out totally different than I had expected. ...

Hey, Gladius, m'friend! ^_^ Let's see what happens in your second chapter, shall we? *reads* Vanessa Satori was amusing her younger brother , Soran , when someone knocked on the ...

Here to crit. ^_^ I gazed down at the brightly lit underground city from my perch on the top of an apartment building. I gazed down at the brightly lit ...

I forgot I had this story up. =/ I was just looking through my portfolio and...I found this. Thanks for the comments, DW, Twit, and Choco. They are appreciated. More ...

Ooh! Such a wonderfully long, embarrassing critique, kitty! Thanks so much! :D *hugs for Heather!* I made the changes and the revised version is currently up now. Jabber, the One ...

Hey, Gladius! Since my brother is leaving my alone finally, I can review your work. ^_^ longer than her counterpart , Din. glancing guardedly around for signs of more monsters ...