JabberHut

Hey, Mad! Let's see what I have here...:twisted: "Get up Tom!' Screeched my grandmother, the smell of her smoldering cigarette burning my nostrils. "Screeched" should be lowercased here since it ...

It took me long enough to write this, but I was swamped with work and critiques. My writing is not at the top of my list. Not near enough. ^^; ...

Hello! I wasn't going to do a full-out crit because Aet did a fairly good job with his. However, I read this: Pay attention to Aet's crit and maybe mine ...

Hey, Ash! I'd be more than happy to read this! :D *ignores blank thank you cards next to her* Lethero was twenty when Orlam was born and as Orlam grew ...

And Jab, Sbs are in the literary forum. Meh, you learn something new every day. :D So you wouldn't pay to post in the SBs, only to start them like ...

Alright, Ash. I'm sorry I held this off, but my teachers swamped me with homework and I still ] didn't get it all finished. >_< Anyway, here goes nothin'...or somethin' ...

It works for me. =/ It sounds interesting. I'll surf through the site when I get the time. :lol: Gotta love school... Jabber, the One and Only!

I only touched Sudoku here a few times. It's not a real heartbreaker. *stares at pile of Sudoku books* I'm actually glad that the site might not be as slow ...

From what I understand, SBs are not in the literary forums. Therefore, it doesn't even apply? I could be wrong (I don't visit the SBs). Anyway, back to a topic ...

I completely forgot I posted this. :shock: Anyway, thanks for all your reviews. More are, of course, welcome. I'm still wondering when I thought this up...=/ Whatever. Thank you ^_^ ...

Hey, Goth. ^_^ Thought I'd stop by to take a peek at your writing. My parents were out on the town. Were they: ...out in town. Or ...out of town. ...

Alright, I finally have a little time to crit this. Let's see if I find anything no one caught yet. :lol: There were sayings for every occasion, every place , ...

First of all: Still, a newbie wouldn't be able to get in to meet new people, and a newbie might not stay a week to get 25 reviews. I found ...

Hey, Ash! Sweet, I get first dibs! :twisted: The sun shown bright on the mid-afternoon day of Topisk. “A young male, very strong, too. Replace the first comma with the ...

Hello, Phoebe, my friend! Sweet, I'm the first poster! I get first dibs! :twisted: I’ve always been a cautious lover, more justice than fortune, with an eye to the scales. ...