JabberHut

Thanks you two! Those crits were greatly appreciated! Seeing as you both critted pretty much the same way, I'll give you two the same comment. :) I fixed the grammar ...

Yay, Dr. Clicky!! I'm gonna review this for ya because I read the first part and am anxious to read more. :D I spun around to the back of the ...

Hey, Ash! If I remember correctly, someone is currently critting at the same time as me. So forgive me if I repeat anything they say. ^^; I'm in my critting ...

Hello, there! ^^ Thought I'd drop by before school. :D My little sister , Marina, who was in Kindergarten at the time, held my mom's hand while my hand was ...

Hello! I see you have no reviews yet! That means I'm gonna be the first...:twisted: Your font is different. :( Best fix that next time for my sake. :wink: Btw, ...

Hey, Ash! Let's see what happens next! :D When they were fully opened , Orlam found himself in a dimly lit white room , laying down on a metal bed ...

Hey, Dono! :D I've never actually critted anything by you, but it feels weird critting a mod's work. XD Ya'll should be better than I. :P However, I shall review ...

Hey, Alice. ^^ Some say math is the basis of life. [comma instead] But no, I say it's words. Numbers tell you which goes where, and how to run things. ...

Hello! Let me introduce myself. ^^ I'm Jabber, or whatever shortened version of my name you wish to call me. *clears throat* I notice your entry is very long. :shock: ...

Meh, let's see... "One day in [insert name of place] lived a [insert race] named [insert name of character]." How's that for general? :lol:

Hello, Jamie! :D I'm not much with lyrics/poetry, so I'll see what I can do. Hopefully, someone smarter than I will come along and give you a more in-depth crit. ...

Hey, Church! You didn't ask me specifically...but I'm gonna look anyway. :twisted: He looked out his side window, then back to her. He loved her with all of his heart ...

I don't know why, but I posted twice, lol. My critique is next down. :P

Yay! It's up!! *reads* Her muscles ached from the battle with the dragon , and she was overwhelmed with guilt that she had caused the Hero of Time’s capture. She ...

Hey, Ash! Glad to see this is up already! *reads* "I remember when some humans [s]wanting[/s] wanted to go to war as soon as they got a gun for every ...