JabberHut

Alright, I'll try to find mistakes others haven't found, or make suggestions to changes they have mentioned. Some want because they believe they will see loved ones that have already ...

Woot, chapter 5. :D Or part 5...I dunno, you're confusing me. :lol: I just critique. :wink: After Dante was safely in jail, the cop had given him two things. [colon] ...

Oh great, now I have to match Aet's crit? :? Lol, kidding, kidding...I'll try to catch whatever Aet missed. :wink: Btw, you can keep editing your post instead of double-posting, ...

Hey, Woz! Wuz up? (Haha, I'm so funny...) Sorry I didn't get to this sooner. I was way too tired to even trust myself to write a critique. It was ...

Back once again! I guess you're not sick of my nit-pickiness yet. That'll quickly change. :wink: “I’m off.” [comma rather than period] Yazra announced, watching the bear tearing away at ...

Lol, ya'll do know you can discuss through PM, right? It'll be much better, since this isn't a discussion thread. :wink: Anyway, let's see what happens next. ^^ The most ...

Woz! What up, dawg? Done, seriously. :lol: Alrighty, I'm gonna rip, and I'm gonna tear, and I'm gonna smile the entire time. :D “Dark or milk?” the receptionist at ‘The ...

I'm back! You missed me, right? :wink: You don't have to answer. :D The bear stood , leaning heavily against a thick pine, it’s [no apostrophe ^^] body heaving from ...

Hello again! ^_^ Oh boy. :shock: I follow two very long critiques...hopefully I won't repeat anything. :wink: As he turned around, he feared the sight that would greet him would ...

Oh, thank you sooo much! Your crit is greatly appreciated! :D I fixed the grammar issues. Once I get writing, I forget completely about my language. :roll: I'm very happy ...

I know, I know. Another work by me. You're all getting sick of it, I know you are. However, I just need this looked over before entering it in Gladius' ...

Hey, Alice! I would have gotten to this about three hours sooner if my parents didn't kidnap me. ^^ I'm really sorry. I'll make it up to you by giving ...

Hello, Volant! I shall crit this to the best of my ability. I might freak out a little, though, seeing as you trust me with something so serious. :shock: However, ...

Hello! Wonderful to meet you, Aedomir. ^^ Mind if I take a peek at what you've written? I didn't think so. :wink: Before I begin: I'm gonna rip, tear, and ...

Hey, Madd! Before I begin: I'm gonna rip, tear, and smile the whole time, so fair warning. :wink: “Dose [s]any one[/s] anyone have a light?” I asked , taking a ...