JabberHut

I type up my stories. However, I've recently discovered that writing down the ideas is helpful. :lol: If you don't know me yet, you now know that I'm really slow. ...

and i know that parts of it are pretty rough with grammar and wording, so feel free to rip it apart *coughjabbercough*. What am I supposed to say to that?? ...

I usually don't comment on this thread, but this is a must. Alice, you're so adorable. ^_^ I'm gonna steal that purple hat, by the way. :P

Hello again! Are you sick of me yet? :wink: When we finally [s]got to the[/s] reached town, it was a macabre sight. Bodies were burning, [semicolon] some were still bleeding, ...

Hello! :) The black demon had cut into his mother with his knife-like claws , and she’d fallen to the ground, crimson life spilling [s]unto[/s] onto the paved street. Cut ...

This critique has been sitting on my desk for a couple nights already. :shock: Best put it up before you hate me. :lol: I stood up and turned around [s]because ...

This is gonna be a real quick review, since I'm currently at school. ^^; “Because cursing is in [s]every-day [/s] everyday English. Prefieres Espańol?” "Impressive," I said with a smile. ...

Hey, Aedomir! Sorry, again, that I didn't get to this right away. However, here is my critique. :) Forgive me if I repeat anything Wozzles said before me. ^^ The ...

Alright, here I come! Lol, well, here comes the critique you've asked for. :) Perosk looked around the village from his seat on the roof of a building, but he ...

Alright, I took this to school (yes, I know: "Nerd!" ) and critiqued it. Forgive me if nothing makes sense, lol. The half dragon [s]got[/s] swung [or some other word?] ...

Hey, Gladius! I had to do this critique at school (yes, I printed it out and everything), so we'll see how well I copy it. By the way, could you ...

Alright, told you I'd get to this tonight. :wink: Take into account, however, that I am strangely very exhausted. I don't know what happened, but I suddenly went from fantastic ...

Sorry I didn't get to this sooner. :oops: I have homework to finish up still. :x Again, you can hold conversations through PM rather than this thread. :wink: It will ...

Thank you for your reviews, guys. :) Woz--Gah, you're right. What three words did he repeat in his head?? Oh yeah...*edit* Now whatcha think? :D Make the horror relate to ...

It took me the longest time to think of something. And even still, the sixth chapter is not completed. Feel free to rip and tear to shreds. Second part will ...