JabberHut

Here I am on your request. Griff's taken care of the in-depth military shtuff that I don't know too much about, but I do feel weird critiquing after Griff's words, ...

Hello again! :) I'll be critiquing on the comp instead of at school (:shock: I know!) so tell me which critique is better. The one for part 2 earlier was ...

As Heather said before me, we understand completely. You do so much for the site that the radio show was a shock in itself. As fun as it was, it ...

The third part! Woot! And quite an exciting one, at that. :D She comes over to the table to join both our best friend, Giselle, and myself, [period instead] “What ...

I've been meaning to read this, but it slipped my mind...:oops: I'm here, though, and we'll see what I catch that the others haven't. :wink: The stress is visibly gone ...

Ooh, 3B! You look so totally coolio! *high fives* Alice, you're so very pretty. ^_^ I'd also like to comment on Shiko's picture--the last post of the previous Post Your ...

Alrighty! I'm finally caught up! :D I'm skipping the first paragraph, by the way, since it was in the previous chapter. :) The majestic yellow light that shimmered from the ...

*squeals* It's Jabber-Nate! *huggles Shiko and Jabber-Nate* How can one not love Jabber-Nate? :D It's so adorable. ^_^

I never got to this?? Oh, man, I'm sooo sorry! :x The beast stumbled to the ground, and , with a clamber , [s]tried to[/s] reach ed for his sword. ...

I'm he-ere! :twisted: One might tell you – if they so wished- - that a tear was merely a result of chemical reactions that informed the tear duct that it ...

Hello! I'm sorry I critiqued part 2 without looking at this. Actually, I'm more sorry for myself, 'cause the second part was really good. I knew this wouldn't be hard ...

Here I am with the crit for part 2. :) The interesting thing about being a henchman, [no comma] is when realize you’re not but that you might be the ...

Hello, once again. :) heard the gate open behind me, but didn’t bother to look [s]behind me[/s]. Near the wall, far from the gate, there was a small shack that ...

Hello! :) I thought I'd stop by and be the first reviewer for you! :D Actually, the title of this caught my eye. I wanted to know what it meant ...

Hey! I got the review!! :D But after that , he got a bit more imaginative—though no less violent—while drawing a monkey with a sub-auto pistol blowing some windows out ...