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19. Use a completely different font than the default I agree we should make a Critiquer's Constitution. Oh em gee, loverly. XD **Edit: I think rule 13 was doubled, so ...

Hey, Ash. Let's see what I can do for you. :) Whisper pointed out a lot of things I would have, so this may not seem as big as it ...

Hey, 3B! The comp's sucking my brain out again, so forgive me if the crit seems wild and wacky. Ayra: Hah, I'm sorry. I'll try to leave room for you ...

Well, I made YWS my homepage. I wish I could remember how...but I did. :D I'll get back to you on that one. **Edit: For Firefox, I went to Tools ...

Woo! Next part's up! Ruby followed quickly, [no comma] before rapidly transporting herself and the others to where Luke and Koichi were with a young man. Use stood or spoke ...

Hey, Alice. Since you've edited, I'm not going to check the other two reviews to see if I repeated anything, so forgive me if I do. ^_^ Oh, and it's ...

Hey, 3B! The comp's killing my eyes, so I apologize for anything not making sense. :) Elias Isaac was a man of incredible wealth and power. He was elected as ...

Hello, there! :D I'm not going to give a full-out critique pretty much because I'd be repeating myself over and over and I only have five minutes. :lol: AWritersFantasy has ...

Let's see how much of this I get done. :lol: *at school* Pushing him back to the others , she ran off down the hall with Ruby hot on her ...

Thank you, everybody! :) Wozzles: Thanks for your opinion. I didn't want to make Gramma's death so horrifying, though. She's Gramma, and i wanted to make it subtle anyway. 3B: ...

Lol! You actually titled your story with my suggestion? You're amazing! *hugs* It isn’t broken, [s]it’s never[/s] and it hasn't slipped from your fingers, slicing the air and tumbling with ...

Here's the fifth part to my novella (finally). They seem to be getting longer, though, so advice as to how to shorten it is most welcome. If the length is ...

I heard you rewrote this, and it has greatly improved. There were a couple spots that I cursed myself for missing. So this is really an extension of my previous ...

Yay! The third part! :D The stowaways could hear the sound of groans coming from [s]the[/s] inside of the transports... [s]And[/s] falling would give him away. Or combine with the ...

Gah, I meant to talk to you about your story, but my chat froze and you were gone after I refreshed. :x “Yeah, but we have some old homework assignments ...